Tuesday, 6 September 2011

The Garden Party (Diary)

3 August 2011
Dear Diary,

     A party was held in my house today. However, I feel guilty because a neighbor of mine passed on this afternoon. One of my daughter, Laura, insisted to put off the party but I ignored her even though I know she was right. I refused to cancel the party because I have invited many guest to come and I have spent a lot of money and time in order to make sure the party runs well. Apart from that, my children contributed most of their time and energy for this year garden party. They have invited their friends and colleagues. If I cancel the party, I will disappoint them and things would go to waste. No one expect that the death will happened on the same day that my party was going to held. On top of that, I have sent my daughter, Laura to visit them at the end of our party. It's not that we didn't have any sense of humanity at all. Many things has to be taken into consideration so cancelling the party is not the best solution to show respect.


  1. i think the diary entry is too formal. the language is like the language that people usually use to write an essay.

  2. in our point of view, this diary relate to the actual story. It shows that Mrs.Sheridan really concern about her neighbour that she send her daughter.